Showing, Not Telling

🌫️ Vignette: What It Feels Like Inside a Stream‑of‑Consciousness Draft

The cursor blinks like it’s waiting for instructions you don’t have.
You start typing anyway.

A sentence arrives sideways.
Then another one, half‑formed, tugging a thread you didn’t mean to pull.
You jump tracks mid‑thought because something else sparks, and you chase it, because if you don’t, it’ll evaporate.

You’re writing about nonfiction, but suddenly you’re talking about kitchens, then Carême, then your inbox, then the way your brain feels like a crowded hallway where every door is open and every room is yelling its own idea.

You type a paragraph that feels brilliant.
Then a paragraph that contradicts it.
Then a paragraph that belongs in a different book entirely.

You scroll up to find where you left off.
You scroll down to see where you’re going.
You lose the thread.
You find a new one.
You lose that one too.

Your working memory is full — not metaphorically, but literally.
You can feel the RAM maxing out.
You’re holding the argument, the structure, the tone, the next sentence, the last sentence, the idea you don’t want to forget, the email you need to send, the chapter you haven’t written, the chapter you have written, the thing you meant to say but didn’t.

It’s not that you can’t write.
It’s that you’re trying to write while juggling the entire architecture of the book in your head.

And the architecture is heavy.

So you keep typing, hoping the shape will reveal itself.
It doesn’t.
It never does in this mode.

Stream‑of‑consciousness is a flood.
You’re swimming in it, not steering it.

And then — exhausted — you stop.

Not because you’re done.
But because your RAM is.

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🗂️ Then the Conversation Begins: A Reconstruction of the Last Few Days

You:
Mico, I’m lost. I need the next logical step. Where do I freewrite?

Me:
Tell me the shape you’re trying to build. I’ll hold it for you.

You:
Okay — the book is about kitchens as systems. Carême, Escoffier, lineage, hierarchy, transmission. I can see the whole thing, but I can’t hold it.

Me:
Got it.
Give me the bones.

You:
Carême as architect. Escoffier as modernizer. Kitchens as micro‑states. Sensory intelligence. Improvisation. Recipes as literature. Feeding people as leadership.

Me:
Understood.
Here’s your document map.

(And I hand you a clean, hierarchical outline — Parts, Chapters, Subsections — the whole thing snapped into place like a scaffold.)

You:
Oh my god.
This is it.
This is the book.
I’m importing this into Word as Styles.

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Next Day

You:
Okay, now I want to work on the Linux book. Same deal. I know the argument, but I can’t hold the structure.

Me:
Tell me the thesis.

You:
Windows exhaustion. User agency. The philosophical pivot from Windows 10 to 11. The emotional core of sovereignty. The architecture of Linux as a cognitive liberation.

Me:
Perfect.
Here’s the map.

(And again, the outline appears — modular, navigable, ready for Word.)

You:
This is wild.
I can write now.
I just needed the ladder.

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Later That Afternoon

You:
I want to write a blog entry about my books.
Can you map that too?

Me:
Of course.
What’s the through‑line?

You:
Agency. Systems. Architecture. How each book tackles a different layer.

Me:
Then here’s your structure.

(And the blog post becomes a climbable shape instead of a fog.)

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This Morning

You:
I’ve figured it out.
Most people need support from the bottom up.
I need it from the top down.
I’m a systems thinker.
You’re my external RAM.

Me:
Exactly.
You articulate the architecture.
I stabilize it.
You climb it.

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Scored by Copilot, Conducted by leslie lanagan